Monday, November 07, 2005

faithless (haiku)

i will run til dawn
give me something to believe
i will do the rest

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thats a good one.
I'm the same way.

Anonymous said...

I love that you put haiku in parenthesis beside the title. I'm assuming that's to avoid the "geez that sure is a short poem and it doesn't even rhyme" comments.

Wait, I guess I'm assuming it's a descriptive term and not part of the title - that the title is "faithless" and it is a haiku not that the title is "faithless (haiku)"

If it is "faithless (haiku)" I'm not nearly as impressed.

J'

steakbellie said...

i guess i go with whatever is more impressive then!